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She wandered the shadows of the streets day and night, face hidden and a frayed basket in her hands. A beggar. Shunned, she became like a bit of dust in the breeze, lost among the many faceless passerby. But she would not be deterred. Her task was one worthy of determination, it was too important to be left to chance.

For she was not trying to get, but to give.

The beggar bore the basket before her as if it were made of spun glass and it was only her sheer will power holding it together. She offered it up to any gentlemanly face that came her way.

“Please sir, will you take this gift?”

But those few that did not pass by her wordlessly, simply gazed at it momentarily before unintelligibly muttering what she presumed to be an apology and continued on their way.

“Please sir, will you take this gift? All I ask is for one in return.”

Each day she tirelessly asked her question, hoping that one day someone would accept.

Once there was a man. He stopped, peering in the basket. The beggar held her breath, for the look on his face seemed to reflect intrigue. And perhaps, if she was not mistaken… But she was. The man laughed and knocked the basket from her hands before sweeping past her with a flourish. The basket tumbled to the dust and bounced, with the beggar stumbling after it.

She collected up the basket and its single content, which was now bruised. But she clung to some foolish hope that someone may still want it and repair it. But now each day seemed not to pass her by, but rather settled upon her weary shoulders. Time began to appear to her as an insatiable beast, feeding on the sorrows she tried to keep hidden deep within her.

Then there was another man. Like the first, this one paused beside her before inquiring about her gift. She held the basket to him, a faint tremble in her arms.

“Please sir, will you take it?”

He looked inside and paused, the seconds racing by as she prepared to give into hope once more.

“All I ask is for one in return.”

He smiled, but it seemed to be a reflection of bittersweet pain rather than cheer.

“Why miss,” he said sweetly, placing a hand above hers which held the basket. “I would. But I am not worthy currently. You see, mine own is broken now and I cannot take another. But let me give you this advice: Do not give yours away so freely. Learn to care for your own before taking another. Realize just how wonderful yours is, and then you will be able to find someone who can care for it as needed. But it will take patience and strength. Just do not forget that you are magnificent.”

And with that, and a kiss atop her forehead, he was gone again.

As the stranger’s words sunk in, the beggar decided that she would be a beggar no more.

She looked down at the content of her basket. It would be difficult to carry in her arms without the wicker to support it. Awkward, heavy even. At least at first.

But with time, she could learn. Then maybe, just maybe, she could have an encounter with that fleeting fate called luck. But until then, she could depend on herself, for she was magnificent.

Slowly the beggar lowered the basket to the dirt and pulled out its single content which she had previously offered so freely: her heart.

And with it came a love that was truly, and deeply, her own.
Romance is hard. Or maybe I'm just doing it wrong. Regardless, I was rejected today. Again. Alas, rather than dissolving into a puddle of tears in the corner or listening to Taylor Swift-esque goat songs on repeat, this happened instead.

And now that this is finished, maybe I'll go watch some more Supernatural. Yes, watching two hot guys beat the crap out of some demons is something I could use right now.

Cheers.


Edit (11/7/13): Oh you wonderful, wonderful readers! Thank you all so very much (and especially ^GrimFace242 for the DD feature), hugs all around! Glomp!  Really, your support means so much to me and is what keeps me inspired. That said, I've got a couple more pieces in the works right now, in addition to battling with NaNoWriMo, but since I'm currently much too excited for my post-work nap, I suppose that lots of writing shall get done tonight.
Also, regarding the situation I mentioned had prompted this piece, that has since become an event of the past. Life continued on, other opportunities presented themselves. To anyone reading this who may be finding themselves in a currently not-so-happy place, I say this: keep your chin up, you are better than any challenge, and if necessary, Jensen Ackles will never let you down.
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Given 2013-11-07
The Beggar's Gift (A Love Story) by ~wispofcloud Seemingly sad story but with a powerful and endearing message. ( Featured by GrimFace242 )
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PhoenixScribe Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Writer
This is wonderful. Thank you so much for writing and sharing.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And thank you so much for reading!
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This has to be one of the best interpretations of someone desperate for love that I've read in a very long time. Perfect execution of the thought and theme, and very charmingly written. Great job!
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :hug:
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SylveraDrake Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're very welcome :aww:
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Kai45 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
This is actually so helpful and such a blessing to have read it at this time. Recently, a very close friend completely broke by heart and betrayed me in ways that almost anyone who knows her would hardly even believe. I've been off, not myself, since this happened. I started acting as the beggar. But I think this is exactly what I needed to read right about now.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I long ago took up writing as my own way of trying to help others, whether it was in the form of an imagination adventure to get through the doldrums of everyday life or some deeper allegory addressing emotional difficulties. For you to say that my words helped you in some way means so much to me, and I thank you. :huggle: Stay strong, the phrase 'It gets better' is cliche and overused for a reason: because it's true.

Btw, I snuck a peek at your profile, and that Toothless hat is ADORABLE. If I wasn't busy trying to pay off a bunch of debt (thanks school...) I would buy one in a heartbeat. :heart:
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Kai45 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
Oh, well I'm glad I'm made you feel good in return :aww: :heart: I will stay strong...

And thanks, for taking the time to look at my gallery!
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
I love this. It's very beautiful and touching. It has a valid point to.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the kind words and for reading!
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ForgottenFears Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2013
You're very welcome.
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XD1411 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful. You should also take that strangers advice. Whoever's reading this comment.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! :D
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XD1411 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome! :D
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vietblueart Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
...... ;_______; Right into my feels. And my favorites.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awe, hehe, thank you! Hug
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Mendedpixie Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is so beautiful, and bittersweet. Oh, I have been learning this lesson in my own quiet way. Thank you so much for writing this, and congrats on the DD!
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for reading! And yes, the learning part can always be hard, but I hope yours brings you happiness in the end!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz::iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're very welcome!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconsweethugplz::iconflyingheartsplz:
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XD1411 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
What does 'DD' stand for/mean?
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DD stands for "Daily Deviation" ---> FAQ #61: What is a Daily Deviation?

Basically, a Daily Deviation is a feature that reaches the entire site, which gives the featured artists much more exposure on their featured work :love: ... Hope it helps :tighthug: ... On my front page, I put a lot of answers to common questions, you can access them quickly if you click "Help" on my "Profile Directory" (which is the top custom box on the left)

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XD1411 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! :D It's a lot of help! :D
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
DD stands for Daily Deviation. It's a site-wide feature that is given to different artists every day. More can be found out about it here.
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XD1411 Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks a lot! Highly appreciated! :D
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nikkirocks123 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist

that was beautiful...

 

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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
You're beautiful. Hug
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nikkirocks123 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thanks. *blush*
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NekosUsagi12 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Agreed.
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nikkirocks123 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you
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ZeroUnk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is just, put simply, truly amazing.
One of the few pieces of literature that have given me chills, and I'm really glad to say that I enjoyed every bit of it.
Love can be a wondrous and a frightful thing, true.
I'm glad you were able to put a spin and see the lighter sight of the situation.

A well deserved DD ^-^

PS. Supernatural FTW :D
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hug
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Karmachael23 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
This is the best thing I have ever read on Deviantart.... 
Thank you for writing and sharing this!!! I absolutely love it
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Oh, now you're just making me blush. :hug:
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Karmachael23 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
Well blush away :D cause you're a fantastic writer
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Andreiuska Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Student
So wisely done... this is so true and sweet! And I believe it's so beautiful to use the pain of rejection to create something of your own (and express/release your feelings that way). I really needed to read something like this, thanks! :)
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you for the kind words, and glad I could help! Huggle!
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Andreiuska Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013  Student
Hug
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signoreVivid Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
Very nice, beautiful. Intrigue, compassion, self-realization and hope. Wonderfully put together. Thanks for the read.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
And thank you for stopping by! :D (Big Grin)
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KMO27 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
its a nice story
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you!
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KMO27 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
np
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Diabolo48 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
First, congrats on the DD ! Also, I actually am not quite interested in literature here on dA, but this one's title was catchy to begin with. I mean, "The Beggar's Gift", romance ? What could it be ?
And what was it ? Well, a well-written tale, with its own morality, its cuteness, without being totally out of reality either (who would respect a beggar, after all ?), and using a kind of wonderful metaphor. Truly, it touched me in a really good way.

Also, I happened to translate it in French for a friend who doesn't speak English very well, and while my translating attempt obviously wasn't perfect, it forced me to read thoroughly the whole tale again, just to be amazed by it once again.

Congrats again ! Not only on the DD, but on the quality of the work as well. <3
I wish you luck ! -^^-
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much for the comment and kind words, it's feedback like yours that always keeps me inspired to continue writing and to challenge myself. And I'm so flattered you found my work worthwhile enough to share with your friend! Thanks again! Love
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Diabolo48 Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're truly welcome !~
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TheStoreClerk Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Mine is bandaged together to keep it from falling apart. I don't give it to people so easily...

But I do share it.

This is a good story. Thanks.
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wispofcloud Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
May your bandages always stay tight and healing! Thank you for reading. :hug:
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Shentena Featured By Owner Nov 7, 2013
This is so wonderful. I'm very speechless right now and a little emotional. Congratulations!
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